Joey was in the bush, he was camping there with his family for three days. The first two days were good, but on the third day the wind started to blow and when they were cooking dinner at 6.30pm the rain swept in and the flame flickered and went out. They had no other way to cook dinner so they packed the mini van up with wet and muddy hands and drove to the closest camping site to eat dinner. The next day they returned home to have warm showers and a soft bed to sleep in to recover.
Prompt this week was the flame flickered and went out.
good but it was as the flame flickered and then went out not the flame flickered and went out.
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Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteGreat story it was really interesting. I think you could go without saying 'cooking dinner at 6:30pm' I just found that a bit out of place. Great story though. Come check out my blog at http://ssjordanb.blogspot.co.nz/
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