Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Haiku


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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 March 2016 at 17:25

    Hey daniel i really like this presentation i think you have put a lot of effort into it and i think the picture is really cool

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  2. Anonymous22 March 2016 at 11:25

    Hey Daniel,
    Great haiku, the word really connect to each other, 1 down side though, the last line has 6 syllables, great haiku though.

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  3. Anonymous22 March 2016 at 22:04

    Hey Daniel,
    I like the picture and the text but you have 6 syllables on the last sentence, you're only suppose to have 5!
    Come check out my blog at
    http://sssophiah.blogspot.co.nz/

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  4. Anonymous23 March 2016 at 00:05

    Hey Daniel!!
    Just like what Ben and Sophia said, the picture is amazing the view is definitely really beautiful and the last sentence has got 6 syllables when it is supposed to have 5.
    Come check out my blog at
    http://sstinaj.blogspot.co.nz/
    Tina J :)

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  5. Anonymous28 March 2016 at 18:52

    Hi daniel
    I really like the picture
    Remember to check how many syllables your sentences have because you have some that have the wrong amount.
    Come check out my blog at http://ssjennae.blogspot.co.nz/
    Thanks Jenna

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